Here is the winning Under 12s poem from our summer 2010 writing competition. You were asked to write a poem incorporating the word ‘snap.’
A reminder: always check the rules of the competition. If you don’t stick to the rules, we have to disqualify your entry and that makes us sad!
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Under 12s winner: B Apel (QLD)
Timber!
Vrooooom … vroom
The big tree falls,
smashing through the canopy
severing branches with a snap!
creating a chain-reaction;
like dominoes
they fall
until petering out
with a final …
Free exhibition: Look! The art of Australian picture books today
If you’re in Victoria, take your family to the Keith Murdoch Gallery to see illustrations from many of our favourite illustrators (and probably yours, too!). It’s free, and there are free events and activities for adults and kids, tours and a kids’ drawing competition.
This month there is a new series out called Our Australian Girl. Each story in the series is set in a particular era of Australian history and the first books in the series explore the convict era and colonisation, the goldrush and Federation. In the first books we meet Grace, Letty, Poppy and Rose. Each of their stories begins in a different era and each character has their own series of four books.
Today we are lucky to have one of the authors visiting Soup Blog. Gabrielle Wang is writing the series about Poppy. The first book, Meet Poppy, is out now.
Were you asked to write Poppy’s story in particular?
I was given the name Poppy by my publisher. But they let me decide on the era in Australian history that I wanted to write about. I chose the Gold Rush because it was a very exciting time, and because my great grandfather came to Australia then. He was Chinese. I have written him into the third book which is called Poppy and the Thief. I have never met my great grandfather so I don’t know what kind of man he was. I therefore had to make up a lot, especially about his personality. But I did know what town he settled in and what he did for a living. There is a plaque in Wahgunyah on the Murray River that is dedicated to him. He was a pioneer in that area.
Poppy’s story is set in 1864. Did you have to do some research before you starting writing?
With historical fiction you always have to do heaps of research. Even though Poppy is not a real person, a lot of the facts in the novel are true. For example, Harry Power is a real bushranger. When I write a story, I see a picture in my mind as if I’m watching a movie, so before I could start the Poppy series I had to have an image in my mind of the way Victoria looked back then—the towns, the way people dressed, their hairstyles, the food they ate etc. Because 1864 is quite early in the history of white settlement in Victoria, most of the towns we know today didn’t exist then. I had to be very careful not to write about a town that had not been built yet. How long did you need to research before you were ready to write?
I researched the story for about 4 months then I wrote a first draft. This is when you write and don’t stop to do corrections. You just want to get the story down. There are four books in the Poppy series but I wrote the first draft as if it was one long novel because that’s what it is really. Each small novel is only a part of a bigger story. Of course the research part doesn’t stop when you start writing. For example, in Meet Poppy, I needed to know how people lit stoves and fires in 1864. Were there matches? I needed to know what kind of lighting they used and what washhouses looked like, and much much more. As I wrote the story I was constantly on the internet searching for small details like these. We are so lucky that Google is available. It makes writing much easier. Did you go anywhere else to find your information?
I went to the State Library of Victoria and did a lot of my research there. Unlike suburban libraries, you are not allowed to borrow the books from any State Library. I also took books out from my own local library, used the Internet, bought books to keep, and interviewed people. The story takes place along the Murray River, so I drove up to Beechworth and stayed for the weekend to get a good idea of the vegetation and have a look at the historic towns there. Poppy is born to a Chinese father and an Aboriginal mother so I have had to work closely with several Aboriginal people to make sure everything I wrote concerning Indigenous matters was correct. Do you think growing up in 1864 was very different from growing up in 2011?
Try to imagine what life would have been like back then. There is no electricity, no computers, no aeroplanes or cars. The toilet is outside or just a hole in the ground. You ride on horses or in carriages or else walk. If your father is a gold prospector you probably live in a tent or bark hut if you’re lucky, by the banks of a creek muddied with gold panning. You don’t go to school unless you live in a town. Probably at least one of your brothers and sisters has died. If you are an Aboriginal girl, life is much worse for you. You would be forcibly taken away from your parents and put on a mission like Bird Creek. There you would be trained as a servant girl to work in a rich person’s home. You most likely would never see your mum or dad ever again. What do you like best about Poppy’s character?
Poppy is brave, much braver than I could ever be. She is resourceful and creative and most of all, she is very kind.
Have you read any of the other ‘Our Australian Girl’ books?
Yes. I love Grace and Letty and Rose. They are all such strong characters and their stories are very exciting.
Gabrielle Wang, author of Meet Poppy
Did you find writing ‘Meet Poppy‘ any different from writing your previous books?
The Poppy books, Meet Poppy, Poppy at Summerhill, Poppy and the Thief, and Poppy Comes Home are a series and I’ve never written a series before. But now I have a taste for it, I’ve decided to start on another series soon. I’m not sure what it’s going to be about, or what my main character will be called. I’ll let it simmer away in my mind first. Whenever I visit a school to talk about my books I’m constantly on the lookout for names to use in my next story.
Gabrielle Wang’s books include The Garden of Empress Cassia, The Pearl of Tiger Bay, The Hidden Monastery, The Lion Drummer, A Ghost in My Suitcase and Little Paradise. You can find out more about her and her books on her website http://www.gabriellewang.com/.
You can find out more about the Our Australian Girl series on the series website. The website also has a fun page including a quiz, activities and a competition.
You’ve probably heard that The Lost Thing—a 15 minute animated short film based on the book by Shaun Tan—has been shortlisted for an Oscar. If you haven’t seen the trailer yet, you’ll find it at The Lost Thing website.
Our visitor today is Ken Spillman, author of many books, including Jake’s Gigantic List and Jake’s Monster Mess. The third book in the series Jake’s Balloon Blast will be out in March 2011.
What made you become a writer?
Quite simply, a love of stories. That developed early and by the age of 8 I was a keen writer, even during school holidays. When I was 15, my English teacher told me to keep writing. He forgot to tell me to stop writing, so I’m still going. It’s all his fault.
Was it easy to get your first book published?
It was, actually, but before that I’d published a lot of short stories and poems, while having quite a few rejections as well.
What was your favourite book as a child?
I had many, including adventure stories like Robin Hood and Tom Sawyer. But an enduring favourite was – and IS – The Little Prince. That always gets me thinking – I can revisit it every year and learn something new!
Where do you get your ideas/inspiration?
It’s very difficult not to get ideas – so the trick is to give some time to the ideas you do have. For me, watching and listening leads to imagining, and that’s where story begins. After that, it’s all about work.
What do you like to do when you’re not writing?
I like to read! But I also love sports and enjoy swimming or kicking a ball around. Travelling is also great, and recently I’ve enjoyed talking to big groups of Jake fans in Asian countries.
Are you working on a book at the moment?
I’ve always got a few books on the go. Chris Nixon is illustrating the fourth Jake book – with a sporting theme – and I’ve written two more. I’m also working on a picture book for Scholastic and a new series for release by Puffin India later this year.
When you are writing the Jake books, do you work closely with Chris Nixon, or do you finish the text and then leave him to do the illustrations?
I finish the story first, but since the first Jake book I’ve been able to imagine what Chris will be able to do with it as I go along. He nailed the Jake character straight off, so I know he’s always going to really ‘get’ what I write.
Do you have any advice for young writers?
First and foremost, have fun. What a magical thing it is to create whole worlds – with just paper and ink! If you enjoy writing, you’ll do it often – and that’s the second thing … work!
Brain Drain by Christine Harris, ill. by Gus Gordon. Published by Hodder Headline Australia, ISBN 9780733612763
Reviewed by Elliana*, 9, WA
Brain Drain is about a young boy called Hamish. Hamish has a sister called Lucy. One day Hamish had too much time on the computer playing silly games when he got brain drained and the computer swapped brains with him. Lucy told her parents but they didn’t believe her. How can Lucy get old Hamish back and not acting like a computer anymore?
I think this book is suitable for girls and boys aged 9+ because they might find this book a bit confusing. I give this book 3/5. I liked the book because it was funny and silly.
[Brain Drain is out of print but your local library may have a copy.]
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*Elliana is a member of our Undercover Readers Club. A review copy of Brain Drain was provided by the author.
We were thrilled to discover a new poetry blog this week, called Fred’s Petals. We liked it so much, we asked Frederique if we could interview her, and she kindly agreed.
Fred, the poet behind Fred's Petals (2011)
Fred, can you tell us a bit about yourself?
My name is Fred, I live in the bush. I’m seven years old and I have a sister called Una, and a little baby brother called Avery. I like reading books and magazines and I like writing poetry.
How long have you been writing poems?
For three years.
Why did you decide to start the Fred’s Petals blog?
For my friend Yumi could read them, she lives in Canada.
Where do you get your ideas for your poems?
Things around me give me ideas and sometimes my family helps me.
Do you like to read (or listen to) other people’s poems ?
I like to listen when somebody reads poems to me. I like listening to other people’s poems have great ideas like my mum.
Some kids think writing poems is hard. Do you have any advice that would help kids who want to start writing poems?
Well you just think of a name to start, and then write about the name and rhyme the words. I come up with my ideas by thinking about the things around me. You could try writing about where you are, and what they see, and come up with a little story that rhymes.
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Be sure to visit Fred’s Petals and leave a comment. (All poets love some appreciation!)
Authors for Queensland is an online auction set up to raise money for the Qld Premier’s Disaster Relief Appeal. Up for auction are books signed by the authors and/or illustrators, picture book illustrations, manuscript assessments for writers, author mentorships, Alphabet Soup subscriptions and much more. (Make sure you check with an adult about bidding for items.)
Items that caught our eye included:
Signed copies of Wendy Orr’s new book Raven’s Mountain (out February)
Signed copies of Katrina Germein’s My Dad Thinks He’s Funny
Signed copies of Karen Collum’s Samuel’s Kisses
Signed copy of The Tomorrow Book by Jackie French
A full set of signed Billie B Brown books by Sally Rippin
Signed copy of This is the Mud by Kathryn Apel
Signed copies of Famous and Chess Nuts by Julia Lawrinson
Illustration (unframed) by Judith Rossell from Janeen Brian’s book Too Tight Benito