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Sharon Dalgleish on Saving Shark Pup

Sharon Dalgleish has over 50 published books for children and worked for many years as a librarian, and then as a teacher. She now spends her days writing stories, non-fiction and poetry for children.

Sharon lives in Sydney with Maisie, her rescue dog/office assistant. Today we’re chatting with Sharon about her picture book with Amandine Thomas: Saving Shark Pup: The Incredible True Story.

A head and shoulders photo of Sharon Dalgleish.

From the publisher:

The cover of a nonfiction picture book, Saving Shark Pup.

The publisher provided Alphabet Soup with a reading copy of this book.


I was living in Manly when the shark pup washed up on the beach, so it was like it happened right in my own backyard. My daughter and her friends were at the beach and saw it all. They phoned to tell me – but I was at work and couldn’t rush to the beach. So, they sent me video updates!

The shark (nicknamed Fluffy) made me think differently about sharks and stayed in my heart for years. As I walked along the beach up to the headland lookout each morning, I would scan the ocean, wondering if it had survived and where he might be now. Great whites can live for over sixty years, so I’ll be looking for a long time!

I was sure someone would write Fluffy’s story. But no one did. Eventually, I sat down to try to capture his story on the page myself … hoping my words would inspire others to think differently about sharks, too.

I read everything I could find about great white sharks, in books and on scientific websites. It was particularly hard to find information about how great white sharks are born! Scientists are still trying to discover this. The best part of the research was making contact with and interviewing one of the aquarists who rescued the shark. She stayed by his side throughout the rescue – over twenty-four hours in the water with no sleep and wearing heavy equipment. She also read my final manuscript to make sure all the facts were correct. And she was VIP guest at the book launch party!

Amandine created her amazing art after my text was completed. When I first saw her art, I couldn’t believe how she had captured the colours, emotion, movement and even the sounds of the rescue. And how she has added so much to the story with every spread showing a different angle or perspective. We have never met in person (she is in Melbourne and I am in Sydney) but she did come to the book launch party via video! It was so special.

They worked with extraordinary teamwork, trying different ideas and never giving up. By the end of the rescue, they were overwhelmingly exhausted but also in awe of being in the presence of such a majestic animal. Great white sharks can be dangerous. And this one was stressed and in a confined space. But not once during the rescue did any of the divers feel threatened by Fluffy. They felt honoured to be able to help this magnificent wild creature. To me they are heroes!

I’m working on another nonfiction picture book. I adore poetic, lyrical writing. But I love silly humour, too. So, I’m having loads of fun working on a few funny picture books. I’ve also drafted an outline for a Chapter Book series. It’s about a character who always gets things wrong. I’ve written the first book and now planning the next two books.

Saving Shark Pup: The Incredible True Story is out now! Ask for it at your favourite bookshop or local library.


Take a look at some pages inside Saving Shark Pup

Download Teachers’ Notes

Visit Sharon Dalgleish’s website for more about her and her books

Visit Amandine Thomas’s website for more about her and her art

The cover of a nonfiction picture book, Saving Shark Pup.
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Claire Saxby on Storm

A head and shoulders photo of Claire Saxby

Claire Saxby is an award-winning author and has lived in many places through Australia and beyond. She writes about nature, about history and more.

You might have read some of her books already, like Tree, Iceberg or Great White Shark. Claire is passionate about encouraging curiosity and wonder. Today we’re chatting to her about Storm, illustrated by Jess Racklyeft.

The cover of the picture book, Storm.

From the publisher:

The publisher provided Alphabet Soup with a reading copy of this book.


This is such a great question! Thank you. I feel like poems are a bit like a photograph and picture books are more like a movie. So if there is a single idea or image I’m trying to catch, then it’s likely to be a poem. If there’s a story, if there are twists and turns, escalations and solutions, then it’s likely to be a story. Within Storm, there are written stories, but there are also visual stories. Working with Jess on many books, I know how much space I can leave for her to create her visual narratives and can be sure that my word stories will work with her visual ones. But poem or story, I draft and redraft until I am confident that it’s the right words in the right place, each word working as hard as it can to create word pictures in a reader’s mind. 

Jess and I had worked on three books in this series: Iceberg, Tree and Volcano and we considered them to be showcasing Water, Earth and Fire, so it seemed a natural next to write Storm. I gathered a rockpool from here, an escarpment from there, a sandy beach from another place, and a shallow reef from another beach  (the little green fish that appears in Storm is from this reef) and sewed them all together in a single story. After I’d written it, I moved to a beachside town and my closest beach features all of these elements! So it could have been written about my local beach, but I hope that means that readers will recognise elements of their local beach. 

All of the books in this series have foldout pages, but I never know which part of the story will become doubly wonderful in this way. Jess and I do talk about the general idea for a story, then Jess very generously steps back and lets me write. When I’m done, I step back and let Jess work her magic. It’s a very rewarding way to work, I love it. Of course, there’s a whole, almost silent, publishing team behind the making of these books and the books are the best they can be because of their insight and skilled guidance. 

I call my first draft a ‘0 draft’ because it’s not even good enough to be called a first draft! It’s more a rambling, stop-start-stop again document that I keep working on until I find a possible direction for a story. Then I begin a First Draft … and a Second Draft and … well you get the idea. When I reach a spot where the story could go one way or the other, then I start a new document. That way if it all goes wrong, I can go back to that previous draft and choose a different direction. It is both easier and harder with poetry, because there are even fewer words to make work well and that means adjusting each word, each line, each stanza until it sings. Sometimes I cross out words, put arrows moving words around, cut some out, add more. I do multiple drafts for both, and generally it’s not until draft 3 or 4 that a poem or story really starts to take shape.

Ooh, okay. I have two books coming out next year, one about a hat-wearing caterpillar (yes it’s a real one) and the other about two explorers and the story is told in parallel. Jess is busy illustrating the explorers, and the caterpillar book is my first with this illustrator and it is BEAUTIFUL! I have two new picture books in research stage – which is the stage BEFORE a 0 draft, so I have no idea really what they will be …

Storm is out now! Ask for it at your favourite bookshop or local library.


See some pages inside Storm

Download the Teachers’ Notes (see below the book’s cover)

Visit the author’s website for more about Claire Saxby and her books

Visit the illustrator’s website for more about Jess Racklyeft and her books

The cover of the picture book, Storm.
Posted in Book reviews by kids, Book reviews by Marley

Book review: When the Mountain Wakes

The Mountain Wakes is a picture book about persisting until you get what you need. It’s a great story about hope and how the littlest things in life can make a difference to even bigger things.

The illustrations are very detailed and scientifically correct. And the pastel colour palette is really pretty.

I think this book would be enjoyed by kids from Year 1 or 2 onwards, because younger audiences might find it a bit complicated to understand what they’re seeing.

This book is a great inspiration for those who reach for the stars. 


Marley is a regular book reviewer for Alphabet Soup. You can read her earlier reviews here. To send us YOUR book review, read our submission guidelines.

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James Foley on Bigfoot vs Yeti

James Foley makes picture books, novels and graphic novels for kids. He creates with pen and ink, pencil, charcoal, and watercolour and also uses digital tools for his work. Today we’re excited to be chatting with James about his latest picture book: Bigfoot vs Yeti.

The publisher provided Alphabet Soup with a reading copy of Bigfoot vs Yeti.

From the publisher:


At first I tried real linocut, which is a printmaking technique you basically take a piece of lino (flat rubbery plastic) and you carve little bits out of it to make the picture. Then you add ink to it, and then you press it on paper. You’re basically making a giant stamp! But I quickly realised it would take a lot more time than I had, and I would need a lot of supplies (and practice) to do it properly. I also wouldn’t have the luxury of an undo key if things went wrong; I would just have to start a picture again. 

So rather than doing proper linocut, I used the same techniques digitally: I opened Procreate on my Ipad, downloaded some ‘linocut’ brushes that some much cleverer people had designed, and I created my images that way: digitally ‘carving’ out the images bit by bit. 

It was still a challenge, because linocut is the opposite way of thinking to normal drawing. If I want to draw a black line on white paper, then I just get a black pen and draw the line. But if I want to make a black line using linocut, then I need to start with black and add the white around the space where I want the black line to be. I’m carving out all the spaces around where I want the lines to go. It takes a bit of getting used to!

I didn’t set out to make a story about the ancient feud between Bigfoots and Yetis; that was a surprise! It all started with a character idea. Without giving away too much about the book, there’s a character at the very end that was the first thing I came up with. Then I worked backwards where would this character come from? And how could I make their backstory full of drama and conflict? That’s where the story came from. 

The rift wasn’t inspired by an actual place, but I found photos of forests and snowy mountains and lakes, sometimes all together particularly around the Pacific Northwest of North America. I’d love to visit in person one day. 

This picture book took a while to marinate just like Stellarphant did. Both stories are very important to me and I wanted them to be the best they could be. So I wrote many, many versions. Early versions of this didn’t work, so I left it for a long while, brainstormed lots of possibilities, and let the best ideas rise to the top. Then when it came to writing the story, I often read it aloud as I went. I always want to make sure that when the book is bought and taken home, that it’s going to be pleasing for the person who’s reading it as well as the child who’s listening. 

I’m working on four books this year a capybara sequel, a funny picture book about onomatopoeia, a junior fiction novel written by Nathan Luff, and [drum roll] a non-fiction follow-up to Stellarphant. I can’t wait to share these with everyone! The capybara sequel should be out later this year and the others will be 2026-ish. 

Also out this year are the colour editions of Dungzilla (April) and Chickensaurus (June). Exciting times!

Bigfoot vs Yeti is out now! Ask for it at your favourite bookshop or local library.


How James created the digital linocut for the illustrations [YouTube]

Spot a Bigfoot in the wild with James Foley [YouTube]

Take a sneak peek inside the book

Download the Teachers’ Notes for Bigfoot vs Yeti

The cover of a picture book: Bigfoot vs Yeti by James Foley
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2024 Young Readers Day Out at State Library of WA!

A flyer for the Event

Meet some of WA’s most well-known children’s book authors and illustrators for a morning packed with activities, including:
• Helping illustrators compete in an interactive illustration duel
• Learning how to draw your favourite book characters
• Peeking behind-the-scenes to find out how these stories come to life
• Meeting and chatting with twelve children’s book authors and illustrators.

This event is suitable for book-lovers of all ages, but perfect for ages 0-12. All children must be accompanied by an adult.

Meet these amazing book creators:
Rebecca M. Newman
Kelly Canby
Sharon Giltrow
Ash Harrier
Steve Heron
Laura Holloway
Lorraine Horsley
Kylie Howarth
Chenée Marrapodi
Jevita Nilson
Kristy Nita Brown
Renae Hayward

Cost: $20 + booking fee

Each ticket includes:
• Entry for up to 6 people
• 1 x $20 voucher at the Boffins Books pop-up shop on the day
• Gift bag with bookmarks, colouring-in sheets and more

Date:
Sunday, 17 November 2024, 10:30 AM – 12:30 PM

Venue:
State Library of WA @statelibrarywa

Bookings essential via Trybooking.

A poster showing four of the presenters
A poster showing four of the presenters
A poster showing four of the presenters
Posted in Book reviews by kids

Book review: Adoette

Adoette by Lydia Monks

I love this book because it is about the past and present. I really like the last page because it is so colourful and full of nature! 

Adoette means ‘big tree’ and this book has taught me how hard it is to fight for something you love. I felt calm and peaceful when I was reading this book. I actually liked the sad part because it made the people come together. I would recommend this book to other kids because it’s fun!  


Jonathan’s review was longlisted in the Junior category of Alphabet Soup’s 2024 Young Reviewers’ Competition. The competition is now closed, but we publish book reviews by young writers all year round. To send us YOUR book review, read our submission guidelines. Happy reading!

Posted in Book reviews by kids

Book review: Ruby Red Shoes

Ruby Red Shoes by Kate Knapp

Ruby Red Shoes by Kate Knapp is a heartwarming story about a hare called Ruby. She lives in a beautiful caravan with her kind grandmother, Babushka Galina Galushka. They spend their days in their beautiful garden, growing fruits and vegetables and lots of flowers. Ruby loves singing to the plants and birds in her garden. 

I enjoyed reading this book because the pictures and words makes my heart warm. I really like the look of Ruby’s caravan. The pictures are very detailed and colourful and I love them.

I would recommend reading Ruby Red Shoes to anyone who enjoys a gentle and calming book.

I give this book 10 out of 10.


Winnie’s review was longlisted in the Junior category of Alphabet Soup’s 2024 Young Reviewers’ Competition. The competition is now closed, but we publish book reviews by young writers all year round. To send us YOUR book review, read our submission guidelines. Happy reading!

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Cheryl Leavy on Yanga Mother

Cheryl Leavy is from the Kooma and Nguri Nations in western and central Queensland. She is an award-winning poet and writer who loves to tell stories that celebrate First Nations culture, history and Country. We’re thrilled to be chatting to Cheryl about her first picture book – Yanga Mother – illustrated by Christopher Bassi.

The publisher provided Alphabet Soup with a copy of Yanga Mother.

From the publisher:

Yanga Mother is a poetic celebration of First Nations languages. This powerful bilingual story honours connection to Country and the unbreakable bonds of never-ending motherly love. From award-winning writer Cheryl Leavy comes this beautiful picture book in Kooma and English about a grey kangaroo and her joey, and the unbreakable bonds of family.


On the surface, Yanga is a story about the love between Mother and child. It helps us to reflect on how our Mother is always with us in our hearts, even when she seems far away. It’s something a lot of readers will be able to relate to and lays the groundwork for empathy for the Stolen Generations.

Once the story was written, I thought carefully about how to illustrate it. I chose dhugundu, the grey kangaroo, because they are wonderful mothers and siblings. You can read more about how they love and protect each other in the notes for older readers.

I got started on the book itself by working out what words would go on each page (the pagination) and made notes for the illustrations for each of the phrases that make up the story. I set it out in a table, using a process I made up as I was going along. I wasn’t really sure how to make a book and what people in the publishing industry did. I just I wanted to be able to set out my ideas clearly and simply, and to make sure the visual storytelling reflected Kooma cultural values.

I spent a lot of time considering how I wanted the book to look. I studied many of my favourite children’s books, looking at the illustrations carefully to understand what made each of them so wonderful. One of those books was Aboriginal Tales, published in 1972 by Golden Press, which my mother had recently given me. The illustrations have lots of rich yellows and this made me wonder which colours are best to use in children’s books. I searched the internet and found a piece of research that said yellow was a colour that children prefer in children’s books.

Artist Christopher Bassi was then the obvious choice for the illustrator. He is a famous artist who uses yellow as the main colour in his work. I have loved Chris’s artwork for a long time and we have developed a close friendship. I was so happy when he agreed to illustrate and design Yanga Mother

An internal spread from Yanga Mother, including words in Kooma on the left and the English translation on the right
From Yanga Mother by Cheryl Leavy & Christopher Bassi (UQP)

We worked together very closely, talking through my suggested illustrations and exploring Chris’s vision for the book. We spent many happy hours together in Chris’s studio in West End, talking about each illustration, pouring over children’s books we each loved, thinking deeply about how we could honour the story and bringing our very best efforts to each illustration. We are both very proud of the final product and are looking forward to a new project together.

Most of the translation is almost exact. There are some examples where there is a tricky translation, where I have generally followed the patterns provided by the Kooma language. Take for example the concept of everywhen, which is an English word used to describe part of the Aboriginal philosophy of time. I wanted to translate this term from English to Kooma, but there is not a Kooma word recorded anywhere. I already know that “murra murra” means many hands and “gurragurra” means everything. So wandhandja-wandhandja would be everywhen.

Because I am a poet, I sometimes like to use the Kooma language more creatively. The term “yilungga yabangga”, which means everywhere, is a good example. It literally translates as here and there. It is a more playful way of saying everywhere and suits both the genre of a picture book and Yanga’s story. I settled on this choice when I was working with a linguist (language expert) who, like an editor, reviewed drafts towards the end of the project.

Another example of a translation that is not exact is “ngali wadjanbangali”. It literally means we two are going, or on the go. The closest translation that fits with both what I wanted to say and a clear English meaning is, “we two are always together.”

When my grandmother grew up on the Barambah Mission, she was punished if she spoke in Kooma. Like many Aboriginal people, this meant she spoke it less and less. I grew up speaking a little Kooma and other Aboriginal language words, but was not able to speak in sentences. There are not many learning resources for the Kooma language so learning it has been very difficult. I hope to be able to change that.

If you’d like to write poetry, the best way to start is by reading poetry, lots of it. Carry a pen and paper around with you always. Leave a note pad beside your bed. Write down ideas you have and read over them. This will get you thinking and writing down your thoughts. A poem often starts to take form in this way.

It is great to start a poem with inspiration that wells from within you, but you can also sit down with the intent of writing a poem. You can try using what writers call “prompts”. For example, you might sit down with the idea of writing a poem about your mum. This is often the kind of thing you will do if you join a writing club – read poetry, write down and share your ideas, write from prompts and then keep working on your poems until you feel they are finished. I have poems I have been working on for years!

The book I am working on right now is another picture book called, For You Country. It teaches the water cycle from a First Nations perspective. I am also working on a third children’s book titled Mugirri and Samson. It shares what a nyimanj (native ant) called Backbone learns about himself and his community after he comes across the first-ever yarraman (horse) on his Country.

Yanga Mother is out now! Ask for it at your favourite bookstore or local library.


AWESOME EXTRAS

* Take a peek inside the book

* Listen to Kooma Language pronunciations of words in Yanga Mother

* Download the Teachers’ Notes

* Going to the Byron Writers Festival? See Cheryl Leavy’s sessions on Sunday 11 August 2024

The cover of the picture book Yanga Mother.
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Tracey Dembo on This Book is a Time Machine

Tracey Dembo writes books encouraging big questions, daring dreams and wild imaginations. She’s the author of two picture books: An A to Z of Dreaming Differently, illustrated by Lucia Masciullo, and This Book is a Time Machine, illustrated by Lucinda Gifford. Today we’re excited to chat to Tracey about This Book is a Time Machine!

From the publisher:

Guess what? You are holding a real-life time machine!
You don’t believe me?
I’ll show you!
For a start, I wrote this blurb in the PAST.
Yet, you are reading it in the PRESENT.
And when you finish reading the blurb, it will be the FUTURE …


I actually didn’t meet Lucinda while working on the illustrations – the first time I met Lucinda was before that, during the Maurice Saxby Mentorship Program in 2022 (an incredible creative development program for children’s creators that I was fortunate enough to be part of).  Lucinda was a former mentee of this program, and we were fortunate to have lunch with her and to hear all about her creative journey and processes as part of the mentorship.  I was completely in awe of her, and it was so inspiring to listen to her experiences.  So, you can imagine how excited I was to hear that she had agreed to do the illustrations for This Book Is a Time Machine!  Once she had signed up, we met early in the process, via a video call with Tash, our publisher.  This is not necessarily the conventional way authors and illustrators collaborate on a book, but because we are both actual characters in the book (which is unusual), it was really important to make sure we were all on the same page and to work closely together.  It was a great experience to be able to work like this with such an incredible illustrator and creative team, including Tash and Kristy Lund-White (the designer).

I would probably go backwards into the past and meet some of the incredible people who are no longer with us. Frida Kahlo and Albert Einstein would be two people who I would really love to meet.

The cover of a children's picture book: This Book is a Time Machine

Although this is one book I could get away with not dressing up for (as I could go as myself), I would definitely go as the mummy.* 

I just love the different facial expressions of this character throughout the book (I’m pretty sure one of those expressions is how I look before I’ve had my morning coffee).

*Check out the mummy in the letter E on the book’s cover.

Look, I would love to be able to say that Future Tracey would be working on an international best-seller, but I guess I would need to use my time machine to find out if this is true!

In the meantime, I am writing as much as I can in the hope that a future brilliant idea will come to me.

My tip would be to keep on going and persisting, even when your work does not turn out how you want it to.  Making mistakes and mess and improving your craft is all part of the process and so it is really important not to give up.

This Book is a Time Machine is out now! Ask for it at your favourite bookshop or local library, or order online.


Watch the book trailer [YouTube]

Make your own Future Teller [PDF]

Visit the author’s website for more about her and her books

Visit the illustrator’s website for more about her and her books

Posted in Book reviews by Aashi, Book reviews by kids

Book review: My Strange Shrinking Parents

The cover of a children's picture book: My Strange Shrinking Parents by Zeno Sworder.

My Strange Shrinking Parents is a great book by Zeno Sworder. His book Is a fantastic read with an important moral at the end.

The moral of this book is the circle of love. This means that when you are younger your parents give to you by giving you good food, education, and their time. But when they grow older you give to them by giving them food, medical care, and time they need. My Strange Shrinking Parents do that. When they want their child to have something, but they don’t have enough money, they give height. An example is when the giving parents wanted their child to go to school but then they didn’t have enough money the principal said, ‘Three inches of height for each year of school’. Then there were uniforms, school books, and many more items, so again they gave away height. Once the young boy grew into a handsome man and had his children, he was responsible for looking after his parents. He used cedar branches to carve a wooden house with little furniture. His parents lived happily in there watching their son grow.

I think My Strange Shrinking Parents is a book for ages 6 to 10. It teaches you morals and important lessons. I rate it 5 out of 5 stars! It engages you through the perspective of the parents and the boy. The book makes a spectacular read.

Read some sample pages from the book.


Aashi is a regular book reviewer for Alphabet Soup. You can read more of her book reviews here. To send us YOUR book review, read our submission guidelines. Happy reading!